The composition has a focal point, I intended for the focal point to be a triangle composed by the needle which was one of my objects but it turned out to be the triangle made by the black string when it loops. There is visual flow throughout the piece, from the string to the vertical lines and the lines that curve. The shape I was given were triangles, I use a triangle on the top left and right next to it, also in the loop of the string. The piece has a full range of values composed by lines and mark making. It is presented in a professional manner.